Fairly well presented bibliography (apart from the film/track lost - needs more work)
ebi - Shorter paragraphs
Many more academic books and references needed
Need to link boyz n the hood more
Link the main text to wider content
Reference theories
Include post-colonialism, Alvarado etc.
What I'm going to do - Fix the footnotes and bibliography in alphabetical order
shorter paragraphs
add more context
sort out the spelling mistakes
page 1:
www - used research very well
Used a range of media texts
Understanding of the media text and the theory used
ebi - could've added more theory
page 2:
www - good use of wider context when discussing crime, poverty.
ebi - need more theories. There are places you could use representation theory.
page 3:
www - great focus in the representation of the Black community and using quotes to justify your point.
ebi - include moral Panics as a theory in this talk about how after 9/11 the fear amongst black people became less important
Page 4:
www - correct order
ebi - italics
page 5:
ebi - alphabetical order
page 6:
ebi - information about the tracks
www - used research very well
Used a range of media texts
Understanding of the media text and the theory used
ebi - could've added more theory
page 2:
www - good use of wider context when discussing crime, poverty.
ebi - need more theories. There are places you could use representation theory.
page 3:
www - great focus in the representation of the Black community and using quotes to justify your point.
ebi - include moral Panics as a theory in this talk about how after 9/11 the fear amongst black people became less important
Page 4:
www - correct order
ebi - italics
page 5:
ebi - alphabetical order
page 6:
ebi - information about the tracks
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